Sunday, February 28, 2016

PB3A: Transformations

As soon as we began talking about WP3, I related it immediately to one of the programs I ran in high school. As a Volunteer with a within 4-H called Youth Experience in Science (YES) my entire position was to take weekly ideas proposed by the 4-H committee and transform it from a paper with directions meant for volunteers to read, to both a presentation to teachers for their approval as well as a lesson plan to implement to 1st-3rd graders. Similarly, it seems like this assignment is nearly the same thing in terms of creating something for both a younger and older audience but having still to present the same ideas.

The article I chose to work with was “Disciplines and Discourses: Social Interactions in the Construction of Knowledge” by Ken Hyland. The article discusses the aspect of how the interaction between the writer and reader can change reader’s perception of the topic and how any simple change can affect the entire piece. For an older audience genre, I am thinking about creating some sort of consent form that would contain the implications and acknowledgements of how writers can influence readers and the responsibility of sharing knowledge with readers. I plan on tailoring the form so it seems like required paperwork to submit before publishing an opinion article in a magazine or newspaper. From the academic article, I plan on transforming the information presented in order to create a new piece with conventions of consent forms. A few conventions that first come to mind is of course a signature line at the bottom along with a line to write the date as well as possibly a witness signature line. As for the actual content of the consent form I have not though of any specifics, however I know it should contain information about the risks of writing towards the beginning and a statement of acknowledgement stating that they have read and understood everything to the best of their ability and understand their requirements and obligations as writers.


For a younger audience, I am thinking of transforming “Disciplines and Discourses: Social Interactions in the Construction of Knowledge” into the genre of a motivational/educational poster that are often hung in classrooms from pre-school till usually the end of high-school. Since this is an academic subject, a poster in the classroom will still contain the academic writing aspect as well as still seeming logical. Because many of the aspects discussed in the article wouldn’t make sense in younger school age children, I plan on making it targeted toward particularly high-school age students. Transforming a 20-page article to a poster, I will have to keep the content of it somewhat short and only focus on the main aspects of the article, which understandably may cause the subject to lose some meaning and context. Also, as a poster meant for younger audiences, the diction of the poster is going to be drastically different from the original article. Instead of using large academic English, I plan on using smaller simpler words in order to make the targeted audience have an easier time relating to it. Lastly, seeing as posters are meant to engage the audience, I would plan on inserting some type of visual stimuli to grab the reader’s attention, most likely something colorful yet not too distracting to take away from the primary message. 

3 comments:

  1. Junior,

    I didn’t know you had such a cool role with 4H/YES. Good for you, brother! I bet that’ll prove to be invaluable experience that you can draw upon as you continue succeeding throughout life. ☺

    Your consent form idea is a unique one (in a good way), but I’m not totally clear on why you’d be doing this. What’s the connection? How/why does the Hyland piece relate to a consent form? It sounds like you intend this to be paperwork to be submitted before publishing a news/opinion piece for a newspaper, but this confuses me even more. Who would be consenting? What would/could be confidential? What’s the news/opinion piece? In what publication is it being featured? Who is writing it? If you have good answers for all of these questions, then sure, go for it—at this point, though, I’m not sure what your plan is here. (Remember, I’m happy to talk about this tomorrow in office hours.)

    Regarding your poster idea, it sounds like you’ve got the conventions of a poster in mind, but again: why are you choosing a poster? What does using a poster DO for your transformation? Why that instead of something else? Why not, say, a worksheet? Or a report card? Or a lunchbox? Elementary school kids in K-6 all encounter/use those genres on a frequent basis.
    My suggestion is this: ***first***, think to yourself—what “big ideas” are in this scholarly piece? And **THEN*** consider what genres might be best suited for capturing those ideas. As it stands now, your ideas seem somewhat random, but it’s possible that I might not be interpreting your ideas correctly either.

    One last comment, and I don’t know if this “fits” in to possibilities for this transformation, but I know that you’re interested in psych—can you work your knowledge/experience of psych into the mix? What genres do psychologists use?

    Z

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  2. Hello Junior,
    Let me start off by saying this is super duper neat. I never knew you worked with this program in high school, I think that this is super neat because you have an inside perspective into the younger audience and how to teach them now so part of this project should be really easy for you.
    Due to this, I would suggest maybe looking up some of your past files and looking at work you did or created in your program? If you still have them I think that this would be a really nice way to put them into use. You can easily just use some of that work that you've done and just explain the moves, functions, etc. and that might save you some time! BUT I also think that your poster idea is really cool so I would like to see that as well. Up to you! :)
    Also, another idea I am throwing out there is maybe putting similar examples on both projects to show similarties? I know you mentioned a signature thing for the adults, why not do the same thing for children but in a different way?
    What age group are you looking into as well?
    Great start though! :)

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  3. Junior,

    I remember you telling me all the time about the program you ran in high school, I always thought it was super cool. It certainly has had an impact in your life and i think it's extremely helpful here in this WP.
    For your younger audience, I think motivational posters will be a really unique idea. What types of words will you chose to highlight in your poster? How many can you come up with? I think some of the meaning will be lost when you transform a 20 page article to one page poster, so be careful with that.
    For the older audience, I'm not too sure what the consent form will look like and how it relates. Is it more like a 'Terms and Conditions' kinda thing?

    Overall, i think your previous experiences will help you get this WP done. I cant wait to see what you come up with.

    - Edwin

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